Monday 2 July 2012

INNOCENCE LOST


The devil inside me tries to reach out,
The darkness dwells, without a doubt-
It appeals to my senses to accept its presence,
Slowly eroding the walls of moral conscience..

The conflicts, the questions, that were once so grave,
Now seemed trivial, scruples unable to create a thought-provoking wave,
Decisions, once spontaneous, underlining child-like innocence,
were now shrouded with WISDOM-a bit of experience and a lot of pretence..

Complexities carved their way into the world that was simple,
Principles that once formed the base were now starting to crumble-
Relationships that were built with the pillars of trust,
Lost out to the deceit, lay aside- collecting dust..

“Forgive and Forget”-a cliché often said,
was difficult to realize and even harder to implement.
Dreams unfulfilled, years of toil in vain,
Addiction came calling, an excuse to bury the pain..

Priorities changed, so did the people I knew,
Loads of people around, but true relationships were few-
CHANGE-inevitable, took what I had cherished most,
The darkness remained, and the INNOCENCE was LOST..


15 comments:

  1. very well written..words beautifully bring out the pain and u can feel it..loved your writing..

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  2. 'Decisions, once spontaneous, underlining child-like innocence,
    were now shrouded with WISDOM-a bit of experience and a lot of pretence..'-this line sums up the brilliance of the poem!
    LOVED the second and the fourth stanzas and the lurking dark mood throughout!

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  3. very beautifully written.. keep writing because they are truly awesome..:)

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  4. loved it... specially d 4th stanza..

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  5. really beautifull indra... keep goin :)

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  6. tooo good bhaai...the 4th and the 5th stanza...are just awesome.. :)

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  7. an apt portrayal of invasion into adulthood......nd a glimpse of the harsh nd cruel world around from which childhood nd teenage had kept us sheilded so far.......
    awesum amalgamation of thoughts.....loved it!!!!:))

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    1. d ultimate truth.. splendid job indrasis!!

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  8. very nice use of words to portrait ur feelings!

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  9. "its dark u say, ur lids are shut
    u can open them wide, and you choose but...
    trust, deceit----they sound so hollow:
    u shrink the space, ur steps u follow
    cliche and scruples, u scribble it out
    break the make-belief, verity is bound to sprout"

    keep it up!!

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  10. Its not words its feelings.. Can feel the words..

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  11. Its not words its feelings.. Can feel the words..

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  12. This is touching and so relatable, beautifully articulated

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