The
devil inside me tries to reach out,
The
darkness
dwells, without a doubt-
It appeals to my senses to accept its presence,
Slowly eroding the walls of moral conscience..
It appeals to my senses to accept its presence,
Slowly eroding the walls of moral conscience..
The
conflicts, the questions, that were once so grave,
Now
seemed trivial, scruples unable to
create a thought-provoking wave,
Decisions,
once spontaneous, underlining child-like innocence,
were
now shrouded with WISDOM-a
bit of experience and a lot of pretence..
Complexities carved their way into the world that was simple,
Principles that once formed the base were now starting to crumble-
Relationships that were built with the pillars of trust,
Lost out to the deceit, lay aside- collecting dust..
Principles that once formed the base were now starting to crumble-
Relationships that were built with the pillars of trust,
Lost out to the deceit, lay aside- collecting dust..
“Forgive
and Forget”-a cliché often said,
was difficult to realize and even harder to implement.
Dreams unfulfilled, years of toil in vain,
Addiction came calling, an excuse to bury the pain..
was difficult to realize and even harder to implement.
Dreams unfulfilled, years of toil in vain,
Addiction came calling, an excuse to bury the pain..
Priorities changed, so did the people I knew,
Loads of people around, but true relationships were few-
CHANGE-inevitable, took what I had cherished most,
The darkness remained, and the INNOCENCE was LOST..
Loads of people around, but true relationships were few-
CHANGE-inevitable, took what I had cherished most,
The darkness remained, and the INNOCENCE was LOST..
deep and dark.....
ReplyDeletevery well written..words beautifully bring out the pain and u can feel it..loved your writing..
ReplyDelete'Decisions, once spontaneous, underlining child-like innocence,
ReplyDeletewere now shrouded with WISDOM-a bit of experience and a lot of pretence..'-this line sums up the brilliance of the poem!
LOVED the second and the fourth stanzas and the lurking dark mood throughout!
very beautifully written.. keep writing because they are truly awesome..:)
ReplyDeleteloved it... specially d 4th stanza..
ReplyDeletereally beautifull indra... keep goin :)
ReplyDeletetoo good...jus too good...
ReplyDeletetooo good bhaai...the 4th and the 5th stanza...are just awesome.. :)
ReplyDeletean apt portrayal of invasion into adulthood......nd a glimpse of the harsh nd cruel world around from which childhood nd teenage had kept us sheilded so far.......
ReplyDeleteawesum amalgamation of thoughts.....loved it!!!!:))
d ultimate truth.. splendid job indrasis!!
Deletevery nice use of words to portrait ur feelings!
ReplyDelete"its dark u say, ur lids are shut
ReplyDeleteu can open them wide, and you choose but...
trust, deceit----they sound so hollow:
u shrink the space, ur steps u follow
cliche and scruples, u scribble it out
break the make-belief, verity is bound to sprout"
keep it up!!
Its not words its feelings.. Can feel the words..
ReplyDeleteIts not words its feelings.. Can feel the words..
ReplyDeleteThis is touching and so relatable, beautifully articulated
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